Keep doing mean things to your characters, and keep writing about them. The ring was great. Goose bumps, again ;)
The one criticism I'd like to offer, from a narrative choices perspective, is this: I would have liked to ave seen a little more of what was going on inside her head - certainly not explicitly, but I didn't feel as strong a connection to her as I did to Isobel, even taking into account that I know Isobel better than I do Rosethorn.
Nonetheless, much goodness. Double thumbs up, little one ;)
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Date: 2006-09-12 02:58 am (UTC)Keep doing mean things to your characters, and keep writing about them. The ring was great. Goose bumps, again ;)
The one criticism I'd like to offer, from a narrative choices perspective, is this: I would have liked to ave seen a little more of what was going on inside her head - certainly not explicitly, but I didn't feel as strong a connection to her as I did to Isobel, even taking into account that I know Isobel better than I do Rosethorn.
Nonetheless, much goodness. Double thumbs up, little one ;)