https://thew0nderer.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] thew0nderer.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] wayfarers_lodge 2009-06-22 08:12 am (UTC)

Very well written, you've pretty much nailed Darius. You've characterized him as a little more commanding than I envisioned for someone caught in the throes of melancholy but I think I actually prefer your take on him. As someone not necessarily entirely passive even in his depressed alcoholic state - after all he did lead armies at one point in his life.

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